Haiku 5

midnight piercing eyes
the owl keeps hungry lookout
tiny mice tremble
Copyright, July 28, 2014 Faye Lanham Gibson
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July 29, 2014 at 5:39 PM
Faye, wishing you luck... A nicely done Haiku.... LINDA
A. Sharma Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 2:04 AM
Brilliant take wid lovely haiku Faye ! Gl in contest!
Gibson Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 3:22 PM
Thanks, Upma.
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July 28, 2014 at 4:35 PM
Very nicely done. ~liza~
Gibson Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 3:21 PM
Thank you, Liza
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