Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Poet Haiku

Haiku 5

legs pounding soaking
hand clasp lost in wet retreat …
run b***h or get wet

lips wet glistening
rain drops meet and meld as one …
kisses in the rain

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© 24/05/2013 ~GG~

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Harry Horsman June 6, 2013 at 10:33 AM i like these Mandy,, they are so creative, and the imagery is spot on...

Sara Kendrick June 1, 2013 at 8:30 AM Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Great work..Very creative indeed..Thanks for stopping by..I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on my work..Sara

Andrea Dietrich May 29, 2013 at 1:35 AM hey Mandy, I thought I just saw this someplace else!! someone else who used the b**ch word. haha. I don't know why this one wouldn't get on the list as well! Mandy Tams The Golden Girl May 29, 2013 at 1:41 AM Ha it was one that was obviously not to her taste lol xx

Donna Jones May 25, 2013 at 9:29 PM Very good Mandy! Will do well! Mandy Tams The Golden Girl May 28, 2013 at 6:05 AM Pity she didn't like it Donna but thanks xx

Carrie Richards May 25, 2013 at 9:11 AM PD will love this !! She likes pushing the boundaries ......this one does just that! Mandy Tams The Golden Girl May 28, 2013 at 6:04 AM ha obviously she didn't Carrie love but thanks for thinking she may xx

Demetrios Trifiatis May 25, 2013 at 7:39 AM Choreography of kisses, explosion of hearts cooled by rain! Marvelous! Good luck, Mandy! Thank you! Mandy Tams The Golden Girl May 28, 2013 at 6:05 AM Thanks demetrios

Jack Horne May 24, 2013 at 2:59 PM love these, Mandy. Sorry to hear you had flu and hope you're fully recovered now. congrats on your wins, my friend Mandy Tams The Golden Girl May 28, 2013 at 6:07 AM Thanks Jack hope you are well xx

Anne-Lise Andresen May 24, 2013 at 10:55 AM .... soooo sweet Mandy ! - Read my suggestion, if you want. - Good luck in the contest! - Have a great weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Mandy Tams The Golden Girl May 28, 2013 at 6:06 AM Hi and thanks Ann Lise xx

Russell Sivey May 24, 2013 at 9:49 AM Amazing write, such an incredible write my friend! I just love the images you paint with this enlightening poem Mandy! What a delightful and charming piece, Great Work!! Mandy Tams The Golden Girl May 28, 2013 at 6:06 AM Thanks Russell xx