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Haiku 5

legs pounding soaking hand clasp lost in wet retreat … run b***h or get wet lips wet glistening rain drops meet and meld as one … kisses in the rain Contest Entry © 24/05/2013 ~GG~ pictures 2 and 4

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Harry Horsman

Date: 6/6/2013 10:33:00 AM

i like these Mandy,, they are so creative, and the imagery is spot on...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/1/2013 8:30:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Great work..Very creative indeed..Thanks for stopping by..I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on my work..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/29/2013 1:35:00 AM

hey Mandy, I thought I just saw this someplace else!! someone else who used the b**ch word. haha. I don't know why this one wouldn't get on the list as well!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 5/29/2013 1:41:00 AM

Ha it was one that was obviously not to her taste lol xx

Donna Jones

Date: 5/25/2013 9:29:00 PM

Very good Mandy! Will do well!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 5/28/2013 6:05:00 AM

Pity she didn't like it Donna but thanks xx

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/25/2013 9:11:00 AM

PD will love this !! She likes pushing the boundaries ......this one does just that!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 5/28/2013 6:04:00 AM

ha obviously she didn't Carrie love but thanks for thinking she may xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/25/2013 7:39:00 AM

Choreography of kisses, explosion of hearts cooled by rain! Marvelous! Good luck, Mandy! Thank you!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 5/28/2013 6:05:00 AM

Thanks demetrios

Jack Horne

Date: 5/24/2013 2:59:00 PM

love these, Mandy. Sorry to hear you had flu and hope you're fully recovered now. congrats on your wins, my friend

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 5/28/2013 6:07:00 AM

Thanks Jack hope you are well xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/24/2013 10:55:00 AM

.... soooo sweet Mandy ! - Read my suggestion, if you want. - Good luck in the contest! - Have a great weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 5/28/2013 6:06:00 AM

Hi and thanks Ann Lise xx

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/24/2013 9:49:00 AM

Amazing write, such an incredible write my friend! I just love the images you paint with this enlightening poem Mandy! What a delightful and charming piece, Great Work!!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 5/28/2013 6:06:00 AM

Thanks Russell xx