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haiku 5

an old baseball soars across blue sky-- broken glass

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/12/2013 8:51:00 AM
As an old baseball fan from way way back... love it! Remember breaking a window or two myself! LOL BTW how d'ya like my shiny new dentures... quite spiffy eh! LOL Hugs, Jack xox
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Date: 3/11/2013 5:48:00 PM
i have'nt seen that sence i was a boy.
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Date: 3/11/2013 2:17:00 PM
Heather * please excuse typos, lol
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Date: 3/11/2013 2:17:00 PM
lol, I can see this happening - love this, Herather. Congrats on your wins too, my friend : )
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Date: 3/9/2013 1:38:00 AM
I like how you put the old baseball with blue sky. Great imagery.
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