Haiku 5

an old baseball
soars across blue sky--
broken glass
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Ellison Avatar
March 12, 2013 at 8:51 AM
As an old baseball fan from way way back... love it! Remember breaking a window or two myself! LOL BTW how d'ya like my shiny new dentures... quite spiffy eh! LOL Hugs, Jack xox
Situation Avatar
March 11, 2013 at 5:48 PM
i have'nt seen that sence i was a boy.
Horne Avatar
March 11, 2013 at 2:17 PM
lol, I can see this happening - love this, Herather. Congrats on your wins too, my friend : )
Horne Avatar
March 11, 2013 at 2:17 PM
Heather * please excuse typos, lol
Dietrich Avatar
March 9, 2013 at 1:38 AM
I like how you put the old baseball with blue sky. Great imagery.
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