Haiku 5

Tremble of the hand, the position of the voice. Say it to me now.

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/9/2013 11:59:00 AM

Sometimes haiku are like a riddle where you really have to concentrate to understand it... this seems like one of those. I don't know why but I imagine an artist painting his latest masterpiece... perhaps his hand is trembling because he's not sure where to take it or because he has Parkinson's disease... either way a good mind trip for the reader :)

Jack Jordan
Date: 3/9/2013 1:18:00 PM

I enjoy haiku because of the abstraction, and the focus on a thought and it's contrast or support. Nice reading of my poem. Thanks! Jack

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/2/2013 12:35:00 PM

I really enjoy reading haiku and you are better than the average. let me see just one more and then I move on to another poet!