Haiku 5

Tremble of the hand,
the position of the voice.
Say it to me now.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Hicks Avatar
March 9, 2013 at 11:59 AM
Sometimes haiku are like a riddle where you really have to concentrate to understand it... this seems like one of those. I don't know why but I imagine an artist painting his latest masterpiece... perhaps his hand is trembling because he's not sure where to take it or because he has Parkinson's disease... either way a good mind trip for the reader :)
Jordan Avatar
March 9, 2013 at 1:18 PM
I enjoy haiku because of the abstraction, and the focus on a thought and it's contrast or support. Nice reading of my poem. Thanks! Jack
Dietrich Avatar
February 2, 2013 at 12:35 PM
I really enjoy reading haiku and you are better than the average. let me see just one more and then I move on to another poet!
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