Haiku 5 - 2020

bare tree limbs and trunk
winter wizard waved his wand
gifted a white coat
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January 6, 2020 at 5:29 AM
Ritsuko, thank you again for your lovely comments. It was a fun poem to write and you're right, it does feel like a child's poem.
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January 6, 2020 at 2:17 PM
Lovely poem.I imagined the trees in the snow happy to get a coat.
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January 6, 2020 at 1:47 AM
It is a very fantastic and a very cute poem. The moment I read this poem, I felt back to a little girl. Yes. Snow comes out of the wizard's wand. I remember that. I love this poem.
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