Haiku 59

Haiku 59 black lake water shy yellow lotus buds next week’s flowers black lake water yellow flowers’ reflections bumblebees hover

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/12/2013 10:37:00 PM

enjoying this one again... what can i say... i love nature, and the way life will always hover over her... buzzing and loving it... Linda

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/6/2013 11:34:00 PM

lovely, art....PD

Jack Jordan
Date: 7/7/2013 6:29:00 AM

It was a beautiful, early morning scene. Thanks for the comment... Jack

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/4/2013 6:07:00 PM

Good ones, JAck. I love how we can imagine the buds as next week's flowers.

Jack Jordan
Date: 7/4/2013 6:14:00 PM

It was really a beautiful scene. However, I couldn't hang around to see them open. Sad...

Skat A

Date: 7/4/2013 12:24:00 AM

love the haiku Jack..........SKAT

Jack Jordan
Date: 7/4/2013 4:45:00 AM

Thanks!

Heather Ober

Date: 7/3/2013 7:50:00 AM

Oh, I love this one!!! The parallels between both haiku are wonderful, Jack. And the imagery is breathtaking. A fave for me :)

Jack Jordan
Date: 7/3/2013 8:05:00 AM

Thank you, Heather. That's quite an honor, coming from you... Jack