Haiku 59

Haiku 59
	
	black lake water
	shy yellow lotus buds
	next week’s flowers
	
	
	black lake water
	yellow flowers’ reflections
	bumblebees hover
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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July 12, 2013 at 10:37 PM
enjoying this one again... what can i say... i love nature, and the way life will always hover over her... buzzing and loving it... Linda
A   Avatar
July 6, 2013 at 11:34 PM
lovely, art....PD
Jordan Avatar
July 7, 2013 at 6:29 AM
It was a beautiful, early morning scene. Thanks for the comment... Jack
Dietrich Avatar
July 4, 2013 at 6:07 PM
Good ones, JAck. I love how we can imagine the buds as next week's flowers.
Jordan Avatar
July 4, 2013 at 6:14 PM
It was really a beautiful scene. However, I couldn't hang around to see them open. Sad...
A  Avatar
July 4, 2013 at 12:24 AM
love the haiku Jack..........SKAT
Jordan Avatar
July 4, 2013 at 4:45 AM
Thanks!
Ober Avatar
July 3, 2013 at 7:50 AM
Oh, I love this one!!! The parallels between both haiku are wonderful, Jack. And the imagery is breathtaking. A fave for me :)
Jordan Avatar
July 3, 2013 at 8:05 AM
Thank you, Heather. That's quite an honor, coming from you... Jack
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