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Haiku 59

Haiku 59 black lake water shy yellow lotus buds next week’s flowers black lake water yellow flowers’ reflections bumblebees hover

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/12/2013 10:37:00 PM
enjoying this one again... what can i say... i love nature, and the way life will always hover over her... buzzing and loving it... Linda
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Date: 7/6/2013 11:34:00 PM
lovely, art....PD
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Jack Jordan
Date: 7/7/2013 6:29:00 AM
It was a beautiful, early morning scene. Thanks for the comment... Jack
Date: 7/4/2013 6:07:00 PM
Good ones, JAck. I love how we can imagine the buds as next week's flowers.
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Date: 7/4/2013 6:14:00 PM
It was really a beautiful scene. However, I couldn't hang around to see them open. Sad...
Date: 7/4/2013 12:24:00 AM
love the haiku Jack..........SKAT
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Date: 7/4/2013 4:45:00 AM
Thanks!
Date: 7/3/2013 7:50:00 AM
Oh, I love this one!!! The parallels between both haiku are wonderful, Jack. And the imagery is breathtaking. A fave for me :)
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Date: 7/3/2013 8:05:00 AM
Thank you, Heather. That's quite an honor, coming from you... Jack