Haiku 58

Haiku 58
	
	
	#5 downtown train
	tattoo on his forearm:
	We all We got
	
	
	the truth:
	we are all we got 
	rock, solid

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Poet Destroyer A

July 12, 2013 at 10:38 PM

we are what we are... and so far, my movements, are away from what makes me afraid... enjoying :-)...PD

Jack Jordan

July 12, 2013 at 11:23 PM

Then you are moving in the right direction... Jack

Poet Destroyer A

July 6, 2013 at 11:22 PM

another rock solid image... enjoyed...Linda

Jack Jordan

July 7, 2013 at 6:28 AM

Thanks again. It was actually quite a moving experience... Jack

Andrea Dietrich

June 28, 2013 at 6:59 PM

this is awesome. SOLID!!

James Marshall Goff

June 27, 2013 at 7:06 PM

Original....creative, nice, Jack! Jimbo

Jack Jordan

June 27, 2013 at 9:54 PM

Thanks! I appreciate your comment... Jack

Poet Destroyer A

June 27, 2013 at 8:52 AM

enjoyed your haiku, why does this remind me of baseball??, I'm thinking of that movie lol, enjoyed your write, .. ~always, Linda

Poet Tacito

June 27, 2013 at 6:18 AM

I see what you did here. Excellent job!

Jack Jordan

June 27, 2013 at 6:38 AM

Thanks for the comment, Drake... Jack

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