Haiku

Sunkissed leaves gliding Breeze cushioning fall gently Earth greets warm embrace. ( traditional haiku 5/7/5)

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Paul Callus

Date: 8/9/2014 7:03:00 AM

Softly does it....earth embraces, gently. What a romantic feeling! and what a lovely haiku! Congrats on a deserved win. // paul

Sam Raj
Date: 8/9/2014 10:49:00 AM

Thanks Paul, A wonderful comment too. Keep in touch Take care

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/8/2014 6:47:00 PM

this is very pretty! Congrats

Sam Raj
Date: 8/9/2014 10:47:00 AM

Thanks Andera, Keep in touch. TC-:)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/8/2014 12:45:00 PM

Congrats on big win on lovely haiku Sam!

Sam Raj
Date: 8/9/2014 10:46:00 AM

Thanks Dr. Upmaji, Nice complements after a long time. TC :-)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/8/2014 11:44:00 AM

- Congratulations on your Haiku "Aha" Moment - // Anne-Lise :)

Sam Raj
Date: 8/9/2014 10:42:00 AM

Thanks Anne, After a long time. TC :-)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/8/2014 1:13:00 AM

Congrats on a great win, Sam raj

Sam Raj
Date: 8/9/2014 10:40:00 AM

Namaste Dr. Ramji, Thanks for appreciating the write. I also observed you are one among the few who stick to the traditional 575, 3 line 17 syllable structure. Most poets either do not know? Or, are misled, because when translating from Japanese to English the words get compressed. And give rise to a shorter structure with less syllables. (Which they read as examples) Namaste