Haiku

Haiku 


the leaf bent into
the pond, sipping the water…
tiny bird with thirst;

© R K Chowdary
30Jul2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Chakrapany Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 1:14 AM
nice imaginary
Jasti Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 11:59 AM
Jayachandran.....Thank you!
Nance Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 7:30 AM
ooh imaginative and beautiful!
Jasti Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 12:17 PM
Hi Casarah....Thank you so much for your nice words. R K
Kendrick Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 6:24 AM
Very descriptive Haiku..Sometimes birds and other animals need water placed outside for them more than they need food..Sara
Jasti Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 12:19 PM
Hi Sara.....Yes, I agree with your observation and thanks for your nice comment. R K
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