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Haiku 57

winter storm across barren plain road closed summer rain in the forest muddy tracks spring showers in low meadow mold appears fall sleet upon trees branches break

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Jack Horne

Date: 1/2/2016 3:38:00 PM

beautiful four seasons haiku, my friend x

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/30/2015 10:30:00 PM

Nature taking course. Phyllis, I can do without knowing mold sits on the bottom of a meadow. LOL, as a matter of fact, I don't want to know what else sits down there. Anyways, XOOL haiku. Anyways, stopping by to say hi, so HIIIIIIII!!!! Have a wonderful New Years, lovely Lady. LINDA

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 12/31/2015 4:20:00 PM

Thanks Linda. Happy New Years to you and your family. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/30/2015 12:36:00 PM

- The first one fits perfectly here with me today, a grim weather - A Wonderful New Year 2016 to you and your family, dear Phyllis ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 12/31/2015 4:21:00 PM

Thanks my friend. Wishing you and yours a very Happy New Years. love phyl