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Haiku 55

hot summer day
down the beach
seagulls dive
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morning sunlight
through forest canopy
shadows dance
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full blue moon
across the misty bay
foghorn blows
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hot dry wind
across the desert sands
coyote howls

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/10/2015 9:34:00 PM awww, a song of summer!! I had to see this group of magical haiku when I saw my magic number 55 here!! Login to Reply Phyllis Babcock Date: 9/11/2015 3:02:00 PM thanks and yes it is your magical number my friend. Summer is fading fast and hate to see it go. love phyl

Jack Horne Date: 9/10/2015 3:06:00 PM love these, Phyllis : ) Login to Reply Phyllis Babcock Date: 9/11/2015 3:01:00 PM Thanks Jack hope my muse is back up and running. A beautiful day here but leaves are turning yellow and fall is on its way. love phyl

Afolabi Muideen Date: 9/8/2015 11:22:00 AM A well and a lovely haiku, our descriptive is eloquence and excellence.........A.M. Login to Reply Phyllis Babcock Date: 9/11/2015 2:59:00 PM Thank you for our comment on my series of haiku. Have a lovely weekend. love phyl

James Peranteau Date: 9/8/2015 9:07:00 AM I'd say dear poet; your intense joy of nature excels in these terse writes ! I definitely enjoyed this morning! have a wonderful week Phyllis! ......Much love, james Login to Reply James Peranteau Date: 9/8/2015 6:01:00 PM Hello dear poet..I'm going to leave some info on FB fer ya; be sure and stop by sometime today if you have the chance.....have a good one Phyllis...much love, james Phyllis Babcock Date: 9/8/2015 1:50:00 PM Thank you James for enjoying my nature haiku. Have a lovely week. Just having my basement carpet installed today and will be glad to get things back in order. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/4/2015 12:21:00 PM - Lovely all four, well done - I wish you a great weekend, Phyllis - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Phyllis Babcock Date: 9/4/2015 12:39:00 PM Thank you Anne Lise for your comment. Glad you enjoyed. Have a lovely weekend too. love phyl

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 9/3/2015 10:39:00 PM Wonderful images Phyllis, loved the haiku string that goes on and on! Login to Reply Phyllis Babcock Date: 9/4/2015 12:38:00 PM Thank you Upma for your comment. Have a lovely weekend. love phyl

CayCay Jennings Date: 9/3/2015 6:36:00 PM And life goes on. Most enjoyable read ... CayCay Login to Reply Phyllis Babcock Date: 9/4/2015 12:37:00 PM Thanks Caycay for your comments. Have a lovely weekend. love phyl

Poet Destroyer A Date: 9/3/2015 5:41:00 PM Phyllis, all but the last haiku remind me of Texas... :) Summer wind, sounds nice. So I enjoyed the first one the most. LINDA Login to Reply Phyllis Babcock Date: 9/4/2015 12:37:00 PM Thanks Linda for your comments on my haiku. Yes I would love to write a winter poem with you. Have a great weekend. love phyl

Michael Tor Date: 9/3/2015 5:10:00 PM Very nice Phyllis well written haiku. Enjoyed reading your latest write. xx Login to Reply Phyllis Babcock Date: 9/4/2015 12:36:00 PM Thank you Michael for your comment. Have a great weekend. love phyl

Jan Allison Date: 9/3/2015 5:04:00 PM such a beautiful string of haiku:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Phyllis Babcock Date: 9/4/2015 12:35:00 PM Thank you Jan for reading my haiku. Leaves are starting to turn and fall is in the air. Trying to hang onto summer. Have a great weekend. love phyl

Tim Smith Date: 9/3/2015 4:26:00 PM These are excellent Phyllis...I love the third one. I can picture the misty bay....Tim Login to Reply Phyllis Babcock Date: 9/4/2015 12:32:00 PM Thank you Time for your comments on my haiku. Have a great weekend. love phyl