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Haiku 55

hot summer day down the beach seagulls dive ~~~~~~~~~~~ morning sunlight through forest canopy shadows dance ~~~~~~~~~~~ full blue moon across the misty bay foghorn blows ~~~~~~~~~~~ hot dry wind across the desert sands coyote howls

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/10/2015 9:34:00 PM

awww, a song of summer!! I had to see this group of magical haiku when I saw my magic number 55 here!!

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 9/11/2015 3:02:00 PM

thanks and yes it is your magical number my friend. Summer is fading fast and hate to see it go. love phyl

Jack Horne

Date: 9/10/2015 3:06:00 PM

love these, Phyllis : )

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 9/11/2015 3:01:00 PM

Thanks Jack hope my muse is back up and running. A beautiful day here but leaves are turning yellow and fall is on its way. love phyl

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 9/8/2015 11:22:00 AM

A well and a lovely haiku, our descriptive is eloquence and excellence.........A.M.

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 9/11/2015 2:59:00 PM

Thank you for our comment on my series of haiku. Have a lovely weekend. love phyl

James Peranteau

Date: 9/8/2015 9:07:00 AM

I'd say dear poet; your intense joy of nature excels in these terse writes ! I definitely enjoyed this morning! have a wonderful week Phyllis! ......Much love, james

James Peranteau
Date: 9/8/2015 6:01:00 PM

Hello dear poet..I'm going to leave some info on FB fer ya; be sure and stop by sometime today if you have the chance.....have a good one Phyllis...much love, james

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 9/8/2015 1:50:00 PM

Thank you James for enjoying my nature haiku. Have a lovely week. Just having my basement carpet installed today and will be glad to get things back in order. love phyl