Phyllis Babcock Poet Haiku

Haiku 55

hot summer day
down the beach
seagulls dive
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morning sunlight
through forest canopy
shadows dance
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full blue moon
across the misty bay
foghorn blows
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hot dry wind
across the desert sands
coyote howls

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Andrea Dietrich September 10, 2015 at 9:34 PM awww, a song of summer!! I had to see this group of magical haiku when I saw my magic number 55 here!! Phyllis Babcock September 11, 2015 at 3:02 PM thanks and yes it is your magical number my friend. Summer is fading fast and hate to see it go. love phyl

Jack Horne September 10, 2015 at 3:06 PM love these, Phyllis : ) Phyllis Babcock September 11, 2015 at 3:01 PM Thanks Jack hope my muse is back up and running. A beautiful day here but leaves are turning yellow and fall is on its way. love phyl

Afolabi Muideen September 8, 2015 at 11:22 AM A well and a lovely haiku, our descriptive is eloquence and excellence.........A.M. Phyllis Babcock September 11, 2015 at 2:59 PM Thank you for our comment on my series of haiku. Have a lovely weekend. love phyl

James Peranteau September 8, 2015 at 9:07 AM I'd say dear poet; your intense joy of nature excels in these terse writes ! I definitely enjoyed this morning! have a wonderful week Phyllis! ......Much love, james James Peranteau September 8, 2015 at 6:01 PM Hello dear poet..I'm going to leave some info on FB fer ya; be sure and stop by sometime today if you have the chance.....have a good one Phyllis...much love, james Phyllis Babcock September 8, 2015 at 1:50 PM Thank you James for enjoying my nature haiku. Have a lovely week. Just having my basement carpet installed today and will be glad to get things back in order. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen September 4, 2015 at 12:21 PM - Lovely all four, well done - I wish you a great weekend, Phyllis - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Phyllis Babcock September 4, 2015 at 12:39 PM Thank you Anne Lise for your comment. Glad you enjoyed. Have a lovely weekend too. love phyl

Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 3, 2015 at 10:39 PM Wonderful images Phyllis, loved the haiku string that goes on and on! Phyllis Babcock September 4, 2015 at 12:38 PM Thank you Upma for your comment. Have a lovely weekend. love phyl

CayCay Godwin September 3, 2015 at 6:36 PM And life goes on. Most enjoyable read ... CayCay Phyllis Babcock September 4, 2015 at 12:37 PM Thanks Caycay for your comments. Have a lovely weekend. love phyl

Poet Destroyer A September 3, 2015 at 5:41 PM Phyllis, all but the last haiku remind me of Texas... :) Summer wind, sounds nice. So I enjoyed the first one the most. LINDA Phyllis Babcock September 4, 2015 at 12:37 PM Thanks Linda for your comments on my haiku. Yes I would love to write a winter poem with you. Have a great weekend. love phyl

Michael Tor September 3, 2015 at 5:10 PM Very nice Phyllis well written haiku. Enjoyed reading your latest write. xx Phyllis Babcock September 4, 2015 at 12:36 PM Thank you Michael for your comment. Have a great weekend. love phyl

Jan Allison September 3, 2015 at 5:04 PM such a beautiful string of haiku:-) hugs Jan xx Phyllis Babcock September 4, 2015 at 12:35 PM Thank you Jan for reading my haiku. Leaves are starting to turn and fall is in the air. Trying to hang onto summer. Have a great weekend. love phyl

Tim Smith September 3, 2015 at 4:26 PM These are excellent Phyllis...I love the third one. I can picture the misty bay....Tim Phyllis Babcock September 4, 2015 at 12:32 PM Thank you Time for your comments on my haiku. Have a great weekend. love phyl