Haiku 55

Haiku 55
	
	
	flesh and her black robe
	my struggle to find the words
	a painting I love

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Poet Destroyer A

July 12, 2013 at 11:05 PM

Jack, wow.... love it... sexy :-) Linda

Jack Jordan

July 12, 2013 at 11:26 PM

A very sexy, quite abstract painting, somewhere between "real" and not.

Timothy Hicks

June 5, 2013 at 10:07 PM

Makes me curious to what inspired this! Very nice... if you're wondering where I've been I recently took an unexpected backpacking trip with a group of friends (first time backpacking... it was super fun!).

Jack Jordan

June 6, 2013 at 8:26 AM

"Flatness" should give you the answer. My hiking days are over, I'm afraid, but I recall enjoying myself just being outdoors.