Haiku 55

Haiku 55 flesh and her black robe my struggle to find the words a painting I love

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/12/2013 11:05:00 PM

Jack, wow.... love it... sexy :-) Linda

Jack Jordan
Date: 7/12/2013 11:26:00 PM

A very sexy, quite abstract painting, somewhere between "real" and not.

Timothy Hicks

Date: 6/5/2013 10:07:00 PM

Makes me curious to what inspired this! Very nice... if you're wondering where I've been I recently took an unexpected backpacking trip with a group of friends (first time backpacking... it was super fun!).

Jack Jordan
Date: 6/6/2013 8:26:00 AM

"Flatness" should give you the answer. My hiking days are over, I'm afraid, but I recall enjoying myself just being outdoors.

Ojobo Emmanuel

Date: 6/4/2013 1:20:00 PM

mature and thoughtful like the hidden language

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/4/2013 11:23:00 AM

- Nice one, Jack !!! - // Anne-Lise :)

Jack Jordan
Date: 6/4/2013 11:46:00 AM

Thanks!!