Haiku 55

sunlight dims the grey
strands in her deep black hair as
she smiles, a girl again
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Marine Avatar
January 26, 2021 at 12:00 PM
Warmly succinct, an endearing haiku. I "see"her so clearly. Aqua M.
Carber Avatar
January 27, 2021 at 7:37 AM
Ah, if you can see her, Aqua, then the poem works-- thank you so much! [love the pen name]
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