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Haiku 54

summer showers
upon the grassland
buffalo graze
~~~
dark clouds
on the horizon
lightning strikes
~~~
fresh scent
in the orchards
apples blooming
~~~

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Julia Ward

August 18, 2015 at 11:43 AM

I'll look out for it. :)

Julia Ward

August 16, 2015 at 2:05 PM

I enjoyed these. Kind regards, Julia

Phyllis Babcock

August 18, 2015 at 11:13 AM

Thanks Julia. I will have to try a footle one of these days. love phyl

Sara Kendrick

August 10, 2015 at 2:40 PM

Very descriptive works..I enjoyed reading them today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Summer seems to have a lot for us to do and enjoy while winter confines us in the house sometimes..Sara

Phyllis Babcock

August 18, 2015 at 11:12 AM

Thanks dear Sara hopefully will get to write more this winter as you say summer seems to be a busy time. love phyl

Andrea Dietrich

August 7, 2015 at 5:07 PM

wow, that was a lot of my poems you just caught up on. I really wish you had a bunch for me to see. Have I checked out your best poetry lately? Let me go see.

Phyllis Babcock

August 18, 2015 at 11:11 AM

Thanks my friend. love phyl

Kim Merryman

August 6, 2015 at 11:07 PM

Three lovely haiku painting three lovely pictures! I enjoyed reading your work tonight, Phyllis! Love, Kim

Phyllis Babcock

August 7, 2015 at 9:49 AM

thanks Kim for reading my haiku.

Darlene Gifford

August 6, 2015 at 7:07 PM

I can smell the fresh scent of summer showers and apple orchards in your poem. Well expressed. ~~Darlene

Phyllis Babcock

August 7, 2015 at 9:49 AM

thank you Darlene

Andrea Dietrich

August 6, 2015 at 6:40 PM

a sweet trio of nature scenes, Phyllis. Nice seeing you on here!

Phyllis Babcock

August 7, 2015 at 9:48 AM

thanks my friend been busy kids were all on holidays so dog sat and cat sat for them

Daver Austin

August 6, 2015 at 3:44 PM

Love that fresh scent in the orchard, Phyl. What a great way to end you trio. Love, daver

Phyllis Babcock

August 6, 2015 at 5:55 PM

thanks for your comment Daver

Anu Nayak

August 6, 2015 at 2:59 PM

Dear Phyllis, Feel good haiku:-) I loved them all:-)I have never seen an apple orchard as i come from tropical land... Beautiful!!! Poem!!! Love, hugs, Anu

Phyllis Babcock

August 6, 2015 at 5:57 PM

Apple orchards are beautiful with rows and rows of planted trees and best of all the fruit. Thank you for your comment love phyl

Jan Allison

August 6, 2015 at 1:09 PM

what wonderful imagery in each haiku Phyllis - simply lovely:-) Hugs Jan xx7

Phyllis Babcock

August 6, 2015 at 5:57 PM

thank you Jan glad you enjoyed my haiku. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 6, 2015 at 1:03 PM

- Summer is beautiful when the sun shines on the apple blossoms - Wonderful haiku, dear Phyllis a 7 from me :) - (here it still rains ) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

August 6, 2015 at 5:59 PM

thanks Anne Lise and we are getting rain today but expected to be 30 all next week so more hot weather for us. love phyl

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