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Haiku 53

summer rain upon hand a fallen tear ### winter snow upon her face rosy lips #### autumn wind upon her hair braid unravels ##### spring breeze upon her cheek breath exhaled 3/25/15

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Darlene Gifford

Date: 8/7/2015 10:49:00 AM

I really enjoyed your 4 seasonal haiku's. You have the haiku knack! A 7. I'll be reading more later. Thanks for reading my poem. Blessings, Darlene

Jack Horne

Date: 4/25/2015 8:13:00 AM

lovely - all the seasons here are beautifully represented xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/21/2015 7:50:00 PM

these are gorgeous. I especially liked the last two!!

James Peranteau

Date: 3/30/2015 3:16:00 PM

Awesome ! My favorite time of the year dear poet ! Have a wonderful week Phyllis !....Much love, james

Ralph Sergi

Date: 3/28/2015 12:27:00 PM

Hi Barbara: A beautiful stream of haiku. Great Write!

Jan Allison

Date: 3/25/2015 4:23:00 PM

what a wonderful seasonal string of haiku:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/25/2015 2:32:00 PM

- Four beautiful haiku for the whole year - I hope spring will come to you now, winter is so long - thanks for all visits and comments from you today greatly appreciate your words Phyllis - I wish you all the best - ("Monica" is error !!!) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)