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Haiku 53

summer rain
upon hand
a fallen tear
  ###
winter snow
upon her face
rosy lips
 ####
autumn wind
upon her hair
braid unravels
  #####
spring breeze
upon her cheek
breath exhaled

3/25/15

seasonshaiku

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Darlene Gifford

August 7, 2015 at 10:49 AM

I really enjoyed your 4 seasonal haiku's. You have the haiku knack! A 7. I'll be reading more later. Thanks for reading my poem. Blessings, Darlene

Jack Horne

April 25, 2015 at 8:13 AM

lovely - all the seasons here are beautifully represented xx

Andrea Dietrich

April 21, 2015 at 7:50 PM

these are gorgeous. I especially liked the last two!!

James Peranteau

March 30, 2015 at 3:16 PM

Awesome ! My favorite time of the year dear poet ! Have a wonderful week Phyllis !....Much love, james

Ralph Sergi

March 28, 2015 at 12:27 PM

Hi Barbara: A beautiful stream of haiku. Great Write!

Jan Allison

March 25, 2015 at 4:23 PM

what a wonderful seasonal string of haiku:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 25, 2015 at 2:32 PM

- Four beautiful haiku for the whole year - I hope spring will come to you now, winter is so long - thanks for all visits and comments from you today greatly appreciate your words Phyllis - I wish you all the best - ("Monica" is error !!!) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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