Haiku 53

Haiku 53 weeds in my garden buttercup yellow flowers heliotropic weeds in my garden buttercup yellow flowers making next year’s seeds

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/12/2013 11:07:00 PM

Jack, a love garden, from your tend... loving the await you will praise, till it's here again.. the aglow.. good night... LINDA

Jack Jordan
Date: 7/12/2013 11:29:00 PM

Good night to you too, and thanks for reading my haiku... Jack

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/29/2013 9:31:00 PM

This is sweet! Like a botanical haiku.

Jack Jordan
Date: 5/29/2013 9:59:00 PM

Thanks... It's that time of year when my brain begins to think about having real tomatoes.

Donna Jones

Date: 5/29/2013 7:53:00 PM

Beautiful Jack......:-) weeds and all! Ha

Jack Jordan
Date: 5/29/2013 8:06:00 PM

Seriously... They are beautiful, and my most successful crop so far.

Karen Anglesey

Date: 5/29/2013 6:19:00 PM

Nice! really liking the vision of buttercup yellow flowers. Very pleasant appreciation of nature : )

Jack Jordan
Date: 5/29/2013 6:24:00 PM

I can write pleasant pieces now and again, and I do love my garden, weeds and all... Jack