Haiku 51

in pale moonlight
on  fresh fallen snow
footprints appear

11/24/14
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 11:21 PM
another haiku I had missed out on. Who would the footsteps belong to?
Poet Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 2:19 AM
Lovely Haiku.Wish you a very very Happy New Year Phyllis.
Horne Avatar
December 13, 2014 at 3:59 PM
enjoying this beauty again - love it
Andresen Avatar
December 1, 2014 at 11:53 AM
- It's so beautiful with fresh new snow .... small footprints in the snow, maybe a cat - Wonderful haiku, dear Phyllis :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Horne Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 3:38 PM
oh, love this beauty, Phyll. Hope you are well, my friend, and that the weather there isn't too bad. Have a great week x
Newman Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 6:42 AM
Excellent word choice. emphasis on a season word works well. Miken
Allison Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 4:27 PM
wonderful imagery Phyllis:-) Hugs jan xxx
Meade Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 2:30 PM
Ah, yes . . . very nice -- I can visualize the scene, the soft light, silence of snow and mysterious footprint . . . at least in my imagination . . . nicely done.
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