Haiku

in the morning rain fountain of winged termites a fighting with fate

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Ifeanyi Bob Ekechukwu

Date: 6/18/2014 5:44:00 PM

Hey I loved your poem,it was awesome. I pray you meet the lady that will keep you company and happy. Note: if you need tips and guides on how to win over a lady,mail me and I will help you. I guarantee you,you will have one when u apply them. I don't need you to pay me back in anyway but I know every man has his lady waiting for him somewhere. I like to help people whenever I can

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/14/2014 12:04:00 PM

Jay, I like this... I know fate puts up with us all the time.... enjoyed... the ku...Linda

Jayachandran Chakrapany
Date: 1/16/2014 12:20:00 AM

thank you