Haiku 4





                                          The land is barren
                                        Oh mercury is falling
                                        Jack has made it back
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Allison Avatar
December 25, 2017 at 2:15 PM
superb haiku Stewart - we just have rain rain rain and thankfully no snow:-) Hope you have a wonderful Christmas and new year:-) hugs jan xx
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December 25, 2017 at 4:15 PM
Thank you, Jan! Peace and blessings!
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