Haiku 4

gull's wings undulating move in graceful symmetry lyrical motion

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Rituko Shindo

Date: 10/23/2019 3:56:00 PM

There are symmetry, asymmetry, regularity and irregularity in nature. I missed it for granted, but when I read this poem, I noticed it.

Rituko Shindo
Date: 11/17/2019 5:57:00 AM

I see things only roughly. There are many things I noticed after reading your poems.

Carol Fillmore
Date: 10/23/2019 4:18:00 PM

Ritsuko, I didn't notice either until I watched a seagull in flight! I thought it was just constant flapping of its wings but that isn't the case. Creatures are fascinating in how they move!

Arturo Michael

Date: 12/17/2017 3:12:00 AM

Really imaginative to describe grace " Lyrical motion" All the best Carol

Carol Fillmore
Date: 12/19/2017 8:36:00 AM

Thanks so much for your kind comment Arturo Michael:)