Haiku 4

gull's wings undulating
move in graceful symmetry
lyrical motion

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Rituko Shindo

October 23, 2019 at 3:56 PM

There are symmetry, asymmetry, regularity and irregularity in nature. I missed it for granted, but when I read this poem, I noticed it.

Rituko Shindo

November 17, 2019 at 5:57 AM

I see things only roughly. There are many things I noticed after reading your poems.

Carol Fillmore

October 23, 2019 at 4:18 PM

Ritsuko, I didn't notice either until I watched a seagull in flight! I thought it was just constant flapping of its wings but that isn't the case. Creatures are fascinating in how they move!