Haiku 4

Seth Thomas chimes true;
two tones, an exchange of mind.
Light tells the season.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
February 2, 2013 at 12:36 PM
I think I would need to understand who Seth Thomas is to truly get this one. But anyway, I sure enjoyed the read. have a great Saturday. Luv, Andrea
Jordan Avatar
February 2, 2013 at 2:00 PM
Seth Thomas was an early 19th century clockmaker. I should have explained... I'm glad you liked it anyway. Jack
Jones Avatar
January 31, 2013 at 7:39 PM
Liked this much .....this kind of poetry is usually over my head but I mostly got this one... nice..maybe I'll catch up someday with patience.
Jordan Avatar
January 31, 2013 at 9:02 PM
Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Jack
Roske Avatar
January 31, 2013 at 8:49 AM
Love this Jack - nicely penned!
Jordan Avatar
January 31, 2013 at 9:03 PM
Thank you. Jack
Andresen Avatar
January 31, 2013 at 7:20 AM
Well said and written in haiku poem, Jack - Have a lovely day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Jordan Avatar
January 31, 2013 at 9:04 PM
Thanks. It has been a good day. Jack
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