Haiku 49

morning sun
shines in the forest
shadows appear
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Amadore Avatar
October 31, 2014 at 7:24 PM
A deceptively simple, delightful haiku...deep suggestive meaning. I liked it a lot.
Andresen Avatar
October 31, 2014 at 1:57 PM
- Your Haiku 49 gives me a beautiful picture of a perfect morning dear Phyllis ! - Beautiful done ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Meade Avatar
October 31, 2014 at 11:37 AM
the beginning of a new day, the shadows hold no fear, the trees stand watch . . . I am ready for a new day, thank-you for opening the door with your haiku . . . loved it.
Allison Avatar
October 31, 2014 at 11:17 AM
beautiful imagery Phyllis:-) Hugs jan xx
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