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Haiku #47

Lost my point of view A skyline can be erased When buildings crumble

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/25/2010 1:46:00 PM
You certainly captured an interesting view in this concise poem. So much depth in just three lines. Thank you for sharing this one with us and for your kind comment. Best wishes with you writing. Karen
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Date: 5/20/2010 3:38:00 PM
A powerful analogy..well on the way to recovering your point of view.
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