Haiku #47

Lost my point of view

A skyline can be erased

When buildings crumble
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 25, 2010 at 1:46 PM
You certainly captured an interesting view in this concise poem. So much depth in just three lines. Thank you for sharing this one with us and for your kind comment. Best wishes with you writing. Karen
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May 20, 2010 at 3:38 PM
A powerful analogy..well on the way to recovering your point of view.
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