Haiku 45

sun streams
on woodland ferns
mouse scampers
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Horne Avatar
September 29, 2014 at 10:33 AM
could picture this perfectly : )
Dietrich Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 11:54 PM
really cute one. I like this one even better!
Andresen Avatar
September 9, 2014 at 1:18 PM
- Beautiful written - Beautiful scenery appeals to us in your haiku, my friend Phyllis !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Mehta Avatar
September 9, 2014 at 9:49 AM
Nice picture drawn with words, Phyllis
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