Haiku

Hanging bridge . . .
the pot water wobbling
on her hip

Autumn sky . . .
patches of twilight
in the falling leaf

In the aquarium
stillness of the goldfish . . .
autumn dusk

Kite sky . . .
the clamour of children
fading with it

Uphill walking . . .
she takes me into
winter clouds
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January 27, 2013 at 8:30 AM
Ramesh Anand, :-) Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. Glad to see you among the poets on the soups front page. Love your wonderful verse. Have your self a nice & beautiful Sunday... ~PD
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January 24, 2013 at 9:32 AM
a lovely set of haiku - I enjoyed your work Ramesh =)
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January 21, 2013 at 12:21 PM
great imagery--from the goldfish to the kids and kites...and the final walking up the mountain in the clouds...just lovely!
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January 18, 2013 at 5:16 AM
Welcome to poetrysoup.Nice to see you here.These are all very good haiku!
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