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HAIKU

Hanging bridge . . . the pot water wobbling on her hip Autumn sky . . . patches of twilight in the falling leaf In the aquarium stillness of the goldfish . . . autumn dusk Kite sky . . . the clamour of children fading with it Uphill walking . . . she takes me into winter clouds

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Date: 1/27/2013 8:30:00 AM
Ramesh Anand, :-) Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. Glad to see you among the poets on the soups front page. Love your wonderful verse. Have your self a nice & beautiful Sunday... ~PD
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Date: 1/24/2013 9:32:00 AM
a lovely set of haiku - I enjoyed your work Ramesh =)
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Date: 1/21/2013 12:21:00 PM
great imagery--from the goldfish to the kids and kites...and the final walking up the mountain in the clouds...just lovely!
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Date: 1/18/2013 5:16:00 AM
Welcome to poetrysoup.Nice to see you here.These are all very good haiku!
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