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         mood swings...

         night then day then dark again

         now the night zone

Haiku 44

mood swings...
	night then day then dark again
	now the night zone
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Dietrich Avatar
May 9, 2013 at 2:49 PM
I rather enjoy that dark zone!!!
Jordan Avatar
May 9, 2013 at 3:27 PM
I certainly wish I did, but I see your point. I much prefer the day part of the swing... Jack
Hicks Avatar
May 6, 2013 at 11:52 PM
This is why I like the twilight times... you get a little bit of both, instead of the one extreme. Clever indeed!
Andresen Avatar
May 6, 2013 at 9:31 AM
- I always admire your haiku poems, Jack - You are so clever with haiku!! - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Jordan Avatar
May 6, 2013 at 10:04 AM
Thank you, Anne Lise. I hope you have a great week... Jack
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