Jack Jordan Poet Haiku

Haiku 42 - 1,2,3

1
	a noiseless moment 
	he writes in his diary
	incessant snow  


		2
	every day he hoped   
	every day she avoided…  
	waning moon

		
		3
	his need for love 
	he opened his careless mouth 
	oak tree, splintered

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Susan Palli April 27, 2013 at 2:24 AM Clever write! Jack Jordan April 27, 2013 at 8:31 AM Thanks, Susan... Jack

James Peranteau April 26, 2013 at 5:32 PM Need I say more ! Wonderful set dear poet, and I truly enjoyed its lead ! Have a wonderful weekend Jack.....much love, james

Anne-Lise Andresen April 26, 2013 at 11:36 AM Jack, I like all three ..... but, if I should choose one ..... was my selection: 3 - Wishing you a lovely weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Jack Jordan April 26, 2013 at 1:28 PM Thanks... There are five in the series, the idea being to tell a story in haiku... Jack