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Haiku 41

snow melts
on wet pavement
cars stuck in slush

3/18/14

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Poet Destroyer A

May 14, 2014 at 10:50 PM

oh my that's my car stuck 4sure... enjoyed.. PD

Len Gasun

April 3, 2014 at 10:07 AM

A lovely heartfelt haiku my dear friend Phylis! Thank u so much for sharing. I love love it so much. Giving u hugs! love lots, Leonora

Matthew Anish

April 2, 2014 at 10:25 PM

Makes me glad I gave up driving! Spring is on the way so the troubles you express in this fine ,short poem will soon be a thing of the past. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Gene Bourne

March 30, 2014 at 10:57 PM

A lyrical, hearfelt composition. Then comes the fifth season we will face. Thanks for this, Your PS friend Gene Bourne.

Andrea Dietrich

March 29, 2014 at 10:57 PM

It was so nice of you to spend so much time perusing many of the poems of mine you did not see lately. Thanks , dear, and I'm sorry you were so sick. ARe you feeling better now? So far this has not been such a bad year. I have my fingers crossed for us BOTH.