Haiku

In the distance saws
Assault morning's quietness.
Tears fall like the trees.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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June 5, 2016 at 9:59 PM
Sara Giroux, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*
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October 4, 2012 at 3:37 PM
Sad that trees get cut down..Good one expressing your care of nature..Sara
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August 20, 2012 at 4:10 PM
I like the gravitas in this haiku Sara -I love trees, especially paper birch and pines - I should study them more thoroughly - J.A.B.
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August 16, 2012 at 4:03 PM
WOW! I like it!
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