Haiku 40

two worlds —
	night and a new day 
	life’s gyre

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Poet Tacito

April 22, 2013 at 9:06 AM

Tremendous! The battle of night & day. The only winner, is the one that embraces both ends of that spectrum.

Jack Jordan

April 22, 2013 at 10:44 AM

That's absolutely true. Thanks for reading it... Jack

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 21, 2013 at 7:27 AM

- Jack, you are so clever with haiku poem!! Love it! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Jack Jordan

April 21, 2013 at 8:14 AM

Thanks, Anne Lise. They are fun to write... Jack

Andrea Dietrich

April 20, 2013 at 10:46 PM

hey, you made me look up gyre. haha. This could have been in the ocean haiku contest!!!

Jack Jordan

April 21, 2013 at 7:35 AM

It's a good word, isn't it. I believe it's the first time I've ever used it in any form. It won't be the last. Jack

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