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Haiku 40

two worlds — night and a new day life’s gyre

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Poet Tacito
Date: 4/22/2013 9:06:00 AM
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Tremendous! The battle of night & day. The only winner, is the one that embraces both ends of that spectrum.
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Jack Jordan
Date: 4/22/2013 10:44:00 AM
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That's absolutely true. Thanks for reading it... Jack
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/21/2013 7:27:00 AM
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- Jack, you are so clever with haiku poem!! Love it! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Jack Jordan
Date: 4/21/2013 8:14:00 AM
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Thanks, Anne Lise. They are fun to write... Jack
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/20/2013 10:46:00 PM
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hey, you made me look up gyre. haha. This could have been in the ocean haiku contest!!!
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Jack Jordan
Date: 4/21/2013 7:35:00 AM
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It's a good word, isn't it. I believe it's the first time I've ever used it in any form. It won't be the last. Jack

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