Haiku 3

cirrus fan dancer
your curves usurp my will…
       crescent moon
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Duncan Avatar
June 21, 2017 at 10:12 PM
Love the haiku :)
Callus Avatar
June 5, 2017 at 2:03 AM
Beautifully done, David! Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul
Rodrigues Avatar
June 4, 2017 at 5:17 PM
Pretty! Congrats!
Dietrich Avatar
December 4, 2016 at 5:29 PM
David, you are one of my very favorite of haiku writers. You and Kashinath just rule with them!! Love this.
Allison Avatar
December 4, 2016 at 1:26 AM
oh so beautiful David:-) hugs Jan xx
Leiser Avatar
December 3, 2016 at 10:55 PM
Excellent haiku, David! Love the images it evokes. 7+
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