Haiku 3

Sweet scent fills the air Yellow faces lift skyward Butterflies descend
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Mac Donald Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 3:18 PM
Enthralled by this Haiku, Shane! You've mastered the art of the Haiku; with but a few words you can paint an entire scene. Best to you, my dear friend! With love, Mikki
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 4:34 AM
Sun flowers, more than any other flowers, seem almost human the way they all turn toward the sun. A very lovely haiku. I enjoyed your haiku trio very much Shane. Aloha, Connie 7
Gazbowski Avatar
June 4, 2016 at 8:00 AM
3 enchanting lines.
Allison Avatar
June 4, 2016 at 12:29 AM
Beautiful imagery Shane I especially love the middle line:-) hugs Jan xx7
Cooper Avatar
June 4, 2016 at 1:28 AM
Thanks Jan, I am so happy for you about your poem. Proud to have you as a friend. Love Shane xxx
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