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Haiku 3

glass fragments on sand
crumpled words kite on sea winds . . .
love's last message lost
Copyright, July 20, 2014 Faye Lanham Gibson

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/21/2014 5:15:00 AM
Creative write. congrats on the win
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Date: 8/20/2014 10:13:00 PM
Congrats on your win my friend!!!
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Date: 8/20/2014 9:15:00 PM
Yes, liked this very much Faye. Congratulations
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Date: 8/20/2014 7:44:00 PM
Congrats on this wonderful piece Faye...hugs Tim
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Date: 8/20/2014 3:15:00 PM
this is above par, my dear. and it's also a real haiku. Congrats for your win!
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Date: 8/20/2014 10:30:00 AM
very clever haiku many congrats:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Date: 8/20/2014 9:55:00 AM
Lovely haiku with a message that is not lost on us! Well done...and congratulations! // paul
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Date: 8/20/2014 9:37:00 AM
Faye, Congratulations!!! Thank you for the awesome Bottled Up senryu. Stop by my latest blog, "You Sunk My "BATTLESHIP" :)" if you like. I enjoyed closing this contest. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 7/27/2014 6:08:00 PM
This is super Faye...perfect
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Date: 7/23/2014 6:39:00 AM
Wow! Very nice, Faye. This one certainly open up the imagination. It goes far beyond the three lines that you have created. This will be the first Haiku that I have put into my Faves. So well done, my friend.... Robert.
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Date: 7/21/2014 8:20:00 PM
This my friend is a truly great Haiku!! It is surely to place very, very high IMHO.. BBBBBRAVOOOOOO!!!!!!!
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Faye Gibson
Date: 7/21/2014 8:36:00 PM
Thanks, Robert. You are the best!
Date: 7/21/2014 4:48:00 PM
oh MY. if this were my contest, for sure this one is in the top three!!!
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Faye Gibson
Date: 7/21/2014 8:35:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea...I didn't think I could write one of these. Very new form for me.
Date: 7/21/2014 11:03:00 AM
your SECOND line is sure a winner. :D this the third entry I like among the ones I have read.. :D!!!
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Faye Gibson
Date: 7/21/2014 8:34:00 PM
Thank you, Olive...you are so sweet and kind to me.
Date: 7/21/2014 12:47:00 AM
Intriguing Imagery! Nice one!
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Faye Gibson
Date: 7/21/2014 8:34:00 PM
Thanks, Jay; so glad you came to visit me.
Date: 7/20/2014 7:57:00 PM
"crumpled words kite on sea winds...", just beautiful imagery Faye.
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Faye Gibson
Date: 7/21/2014 8:33:00 PM
Thank you, John, for your wonderful response to my efforts.
Date: 7/20/2014 6:56:00 PM
Very effective Haiku Faye!
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Faye Gibson
Date: 7/21/2014 8:33:00 PM
Thank you, Dave...I honestly didn't think I could write a decent Haiku; just thought the only way to learn was to start doing it. You make me feel good.