Haiku 3

glass fragments on sand
crumpled words kite on sea winds . . .
love's last message lost

Copyright, July 20, 2014
Faye Lanham Gibson

lost lovehaiku

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Dr.Ram Mehta

August 21, 2014 at 5:15 AM

Creative write. congrats on the win

Robert Lindley

August 20, 2014 at 10:13 PM

Congrats on your win my friend!!!

Mark Trichet

August 20, 2014 at 9:15 PM

Yes, liked this very much Faye. Congratulations

Tim Smith

August 20, 2014 at 7:44 PM

Congrats on this wonderful piece Faye...hugs Tim

Andrea Dietrich

August 20, 2014 at 3:15 PM

this is above par, my dear. and it's also a real haiku. Congrats for your win!

Jan Allison

August 20, 2014 at 10:30 AM

very clever haiku many congrats:-) Hugs jan xxx

Paul Callus

August 20, 2014 at 9:55 AM

Lovely haiku with a message that is not lost on us! Well done...and congratulations! // paul

Poet Destroyer A

August 20, 2014 at 9:37 AM

Faye, Congratulations!!! Thank you for the awesome Bottled Up senryu. Stop by my latest blog, "You Sunk My "BATTLESHIP" :)" if you like. I enjoyed closing this contest. Always ~LINDA~

David Mohn

July 27, 2014 at 6:08 PM

This is super Faye...perfect

Robert Nehls

July 23, 2014 at 6:39 AM

Wow! Very nice, Faye. This one certainly open up the imagination. It goes far beyond the three lines that you have created. This will be the first Haiku that I have put into my Faves. So well done, my friend.... Robert.