Haiku 3

soft bergamot permeates the morning air-- steam rises

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Jeremy Martin

Date: 4/3/2013 9:31:00 AM

Hey, Heather. Another great little morsel. Could you perchance have been drininkg Earl Grey tea?

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/5/2013 8:42:00 PM

a nice lovely image,,, deep and flowing haiku~ LINDA

Jack Jordan

Date: 3/4/2013 9:06:00 PM

Again, very good! I'm going to read the others as well before I sign off for the evening. J

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/4/2013 1:22:00 AM

lovely post dear)Charma

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 3/2/2013 1:28:00 AM

Nice haiku. Well said . Enjoyed. Tfs

Terry O'Leary

Date: 3/1/2013 11:56:00 AM

Nice Haiku... Terry (I think the correct spelling is "bergamot")

Heather Ober
Date: 3/1/2013 12:09:00 PM

OOPS! That was a dyslexic moment on my part. Thanks for catching it :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/28/2013 3:50:00 PM

I enjoy the scent of bergamont also..I have a plant called Bee Balm or Mandara or Bergamont..The leaves have a lemon scent which I enjoy..Great work describing the tea...Thanks for stopping by..Sara