Haiku # 3

Sqiurrels prance through crumbs
Becoil from black intruders
Helicopter crows
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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March 4, 2009 at 11:56 PM
Great images convey here Gerard.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.
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March 4, 2009 at 1:06 PM
The interesting imagery carries your thoughts in this concise poem. Nice job! Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Keep on writing. Have a nice day. Karen
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