Haiku

Crumbs browning
As grains of sand fall –
Sunshine runs
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
June 1, 2012 at 8:01 AM
I have enjoyed reading your excellent writing this morning Jemmy. I hope you will continue to write and share your words with us. Have a wonderful weekend filled with joy and love. Love, Carol
Farmer Avatar
June 2, 2012 at 4:22 PM
Thank you Carol
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May 31, 2012 at 5:45 PM
Hello, Jemmy ;-) I find your haiku, to be time consuming. I love the ending punch line,, , this sure has haiku written, all the way. Thank you always..PD.
Farmer Avatar
June 2, 2012 at 4:22 PM
Thank you PD
Williams Avatar
May 31, 2012 at 4:31 PM
Jemmy, good haiku..David
Farmer Avatar
June 2, 2012 at 4:22 PM
Thank you David
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