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Haiku 38

blood by the pond her reflection permanent

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/24/2013 1:39:00 PM
WHERE ARE YOU TIMOTHY??? SKAT
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Date: 6/9/2013 11:59:00 PM
Thanks everyone for the feedback... it's a bit gruesome I admit, but I wanted to be different.
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Date: 6/9/2013 6:11:00 PM
This is a tremendous and powerful write my friend! I truly loved each line you wrote here Timothy! What a fascinating piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 6/9/2013 3:58:00 PM
WOW> this is STUNNING. BTW, my fine little friend, have you ever heard the song "we gotta get you a woman" from the 70's? By your recent remarks to things like butterfly kissing and handsies, I think you need to hear that song on youtube and tell me what you think! I just know you would be a fast learner!!
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Date: 6/9/2013 3:12:00 PM
Wow, powerful, it just sort of hits you
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Date: 6/9/2013 1:34:00 PM
Ah, the true colors, revealed. Excellent!
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Date: 6/9/2013 1:19:00 PM
Sounds like a plot line for a murder mystery. Nice work. Great images... Jack
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Date: 6/9/2013 12:54:00 PM
Ooooh man, now I'm gonna be wondering whodunit all night. Thanks for that Tim lol
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Date: 6/9/2013 9:39:00 AM
Phew.. quite a dramatic Haiku--'permanent reflection'. Well defined.
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Date: 6/9/2013 9:01:00 AM
Striking image Tim
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