Haiku 38

blood by the pond
her reflection
permanent

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Skat A

July 24, 2013 at 1:39 PM

WHERE ARE YOU TIMOTHY??? SKAT

Timothy Hicks

June 9, 2013 at 11:59 PM

Thanks everyone for the feedback... it's a bit gruesome I admit, but I wanted to be different.

Russell Sivey

June 9, 2013 at 6:11 PM

This is a tremendous and powerful write my friend! I truly loved each line you wrote here Timothy! What a fascinating piece, Great Work!!

Andrea Dietrich

June 9, 2013 at 3:58 PM

WOW> this is STUNNING. BTW, my fine little friend, have you ever heard the song "we gotta get you a woman" from the 70's? By your recent remarks to things like butterfly kissing and handsies, I think you need to hear that song on youtube and tell me what you think! I just know you would be a fast learner!!