Haiku

waters of Spring

in the paddy field-

green shoots in my heart
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Phookan Avatar
February 25, 2012 at 1:05 PM
A beautiful haiku!! Congrats Brian on your fine win in this contest. nice weekend...
Merryman Avatar
February 25, 2012 at 10:31 AM
Good haiku, Brian. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Poet Avatar
February 24, 2012 at 6:31 AM
Very good haiku here Brian.Congrats on your win.
Brown Avatar
February 24, 2012 at 5:37 AM
Congratulations on your win in Charles' Haiku contest Brian. Love, Carol
Onclaud Avatar
February 23, 2012 at 11:32 PM
clean and crisp 'ku, brian...really perked me up.... congrats on your grand win :) huggs
Dietrich Avatar
February 23, 2012 at 8:57 PM
Big congratulations in the contest, Brian. A most interesting haiku that I recall from the other day!
Guzzi Avatar
February 23, 2012 at 6:04 PM
how blessed are we with the contrast of the seasons! each one renewing us in a different way, Congrad's Light & Love
Dietrich Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 8:16 PM
wow, I am glad I decided to stray off the "footle" path. It led me to this outstanding haiku!!
Kelly Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 10:19 AM
Are you really speaking about our Rugby team ??? . Like them , Brian , our economy could do with some green shots !!!
Scholtz Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 10:07 AM
Beautiful haiku Brian, many thanks for my placement, love Elizabeth
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