Haiku

waters of Spring in the paddy field- green shoots in my heart

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Date: 2/25/2012 1:05:00 PM

A beautiful haiku!! Congrats Brian on your fine win in this contest. nice weekend...

Date: 2/25/2012 10:31:00 AM

Good haiku, Brian. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Date: 2/24/2012 6:31:00 AM

Very good haiku here Brian.Congrats on your win.

Date: 2/24/2012 5:37:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Charles' Haiku contest Brian. Love, Carol

Date: 2/23/2012 11:32:00 PM

clean and crisp 'ku, brian...really perked me up.... congrats on your grand win :) huggs

Date: 2/23/2012 8:57:00 PM

Big congratulations in the contest, Brian. A most interesting haiku that I recall from the other day!

Date: 2/23/2012 6:04:00 PM

how blessed are we with the contrast of the seasons! each one renewing us in a different way, Congrad's Light & Love

Date: 2/21/2012 8:16:00 PM

wow, I am glad I decided to stray off the "footle" path. It led me to this outstanding haiku!!

Date: 2/21/2012 10:19:00 AM

Are you really speaking about our Rugby team ??? . Like them , Brian , our economy could do with some green shots !!!

Date: 2/21/2012 10:07:00 AM

Beautiful haiku Brian, many thanks for my placement, love Elizabeth