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Haiku 35

dark clouds
rain dropping in bucket
drum solo

11/25/13

rainhaiku

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Carol Sunshine Brown

July 25, 2014 at 8:59 AM

I love Haiku and I love them more when I read yours. Wonderful writing Phyllis as usual. :) Carol

Archana Kapoor Nagpal

January 23, 2014 at 5:13 AM

Simple but resonates more than what you wrote. I enjoyed reading it.

Peter Dome

December 23, 2013 at 5:16 PM

Great write well done.best wishes. Pete.

Jack Horne

December 4, 2013 at 2:48 PM

yes, love this

Andrea Dietrich

November 30, 2013 at 12:57 AM

Hi, sweetie, I sure enjoyed the visual and the sound you put with the rain for this one. I am avoiding all the blogs until I catch up from being away. It was good to see some poets visited me while I was seeing my son's family for the holiday. What did you do this week? Good seeing you here tonight and I hope you had a fantastic week.