Haiku 35

Your breasts,
	rising. 
	Mountain primrose.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
April 9, 2013 at 2:30 PM
oh, my you are so good with these!!
Jordan Avatar
April 9, 2013 at 3:43 PM
Wow! Thanks a bunch for the compliment. Jack
Hunter Avatar
April 9, 2013 at 6:44 AM
I'm a fan...how bout you?...haha
Jordan Avatar
April 9, 2013 at 7:15 AM
You betcha, to use a familiar phrase. Jack
Kendrick Avatar
April 9, 2013 at 6:33 AM
Interesting Haiku..Thanks for stopping by..I don't think that I have ever tried to get the scent of Violets but I will now that you said that ..I think that possibly they don't have much of a scent..Sara
Kendrick Avatar
April 9, 2013 at 6:34 AM
Thanks for the visit by my work..Your presence was uplifting..Sara
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