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Haiku # 35 .

Dawn  light  says  hello

Big  Hi , Mister Mountain  Top

Still  waters  copy  .




Inspired by Raul's  Sunlight  haiku contest .

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Poet Destroyer A

April 23, 2010 at 8:52 AM

Much of a rainy day where I am at, enjoyed your Haiku..p.d.

Wilfredo Derequito

March 9, 2010 at 1:55 AM

And the man is still at 35, a long way to go till 69.

Farah Chamma

March 4, 2010 at 12:25 AM

This Haiku is somehow cute. I like this one =) Farah

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

February 18, 2010 at 4:29 AM

Congratulations Sean, on your placement in Raul’s “Sunrise” haiku contest. Again, your delightful style and humor peek out from your words. I love this one! You are definitely a winner! Smiles, Dane Ann

Audrey Haick

February 15, 2010 at 8:23 PM

I love this, Sean! My congratulations on your win in the contest! Peace, Audrey

Brandee Augustus

February 15, 2010 at 12:59 PM

I like the first line of your haiku. I think it's a great way to describe morning light. Congratulations on your win.

Doris Culverhouse

February 14, 2010 at 12:41 PM

congrats on the win!! love it!

Brian Strand

February 14, 2010 at 8:35 AM

Too much pasta for lunch by England Sean,a bad hair day in Paris,and the Scots blew/ threw it in a sin bin.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.Off to hear Jonno'a comments.

Andrea Dietrich

February 14, 2010 at 1:17 AM

yes, this IS a cute way to express that picture, Sean. If you wanna check out the car that bears my name Andie 55 on her license plate, I finally got my first blog and pictures up!! LUv, Andrea

February 13, 2010 at 8:14 AM

Enjoyed the humor in your poem the first time I read it. Glad to see it in the winners circle for Raul's contest. Keep that humor shining!!! Enjoy your honor. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

February 13, 2010 at 6:55 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's Sunrise contest Sean. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 13, 2010 at 5:51 AM

Congrats Sean on your winning poem in the Sunrise contest.. a wonderful Haiku #35 to describe the photo.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Connie Marcum Wong

February 13, 2010 at 4:57 AM

Sean, This haiku has your charming personality written into it and I see why it was a winner! Congratulations. Connie

Brian Strand

February 13, 2010 at 1:00 AM

Cobgrats on your succees Sean.Maybe a double green today?Rgds Brian & thank you for your welcome comments.

Charmaine Chircop

February 12, 2010 at 11:29 PM

One of the most beautiful Haikus ever,Congratulations Sean:) Charma

Raul Moreno

February 12, 2010 at 10:27 PM

Sean, congrats on your placement in my contest...Raul

February 12, 2010 at 7:20 PM

Nice use of personification for an creative view. I can always count on you for a touch of humor to brighten my day. Keep on writing!!!!!!! Good luck in the contest. Karen