Jack Jordan Poet Haiku

Haiku 34 - Oklahoma Cycle

Dim sunrise,
	gray day, darkness
	Winter sadness.
	
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	Sweet sunrise,
	warning sirens.
	Spring threat.
	
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	White-hot sunrise,
	burnt crops.
	Summer killing.

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	Cool sunrise,
	dead falling leaves. 
	Autumn closure.

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Andrea Dietrich April 9, 2013 at 2:30 PM That was a nice set and great title for it. Jack Jordan April 9, 2013 at 3:42 PM Thanks... The seasons are dramatic here, but lately more extreme. I hope it gets no worse. Jack

Lucilla Carrillo April 8, 2013 at 8:59 AM Jack; I love all four. Thanks - you did great..... Lucilla Jack Jordan April 8, 2013 at 9:23 AM Thanks, Lucilla. Oklahoma weather is more problematic every year. Jack

Poet Destroyer A April 7, 2013 at 11:55 AM ooo, you got the images down perfect... Love them all Jack...Linda Jack Jordan April 7, 2013 at 12:06 PM Thanks, PD. It's just that time of year. Jack

Donna Jones April 7, 2013 at 11:25 AM Yep! Jack Jordan April 7, 2013 at 11:28 AM I woke this morning thinking about tornados, and this just popped into my head. I guess it's the coming bad weather. Jack

Anne-Lise Andresen April 7, 2013 at 9:42 AM - Four good haiku ... I like all of them, you are so clever with haiku Jack. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Jack Jordan April 7, 2013 at 11:10 AM Thanks, Anne-Lise. I hope you had a good weekend. Jack

David Williams April 7, 2013 at 7:53 AM Jack, great set of haiku's ....David Jack Jordan April 7, 2013 at 7:57 AM Thanks, David. Tornado season is upon us here in Oklahoma. Jack