Haiku 34

a dandelion in her box of treasures - something special

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/30/2013 3:00:00 PM

this is a charming delight!!

Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/30/2013 11:14:00 PM

Thanks Andrea! :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/30/2013 8:19:00 AM

Sweet! I was inspired by your Wise one poem.

Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/30/2013 11:14:00 PM

I can see the train of thoughts very clearly... how they sorta correlate with each other. Always interesting and fun when that happens...

Poet Tacito

Date: 5/30/2013 7:07:00 AM

A vital key to a new smile. Such simple pleasures.

Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/30/2013 11:13:00 PM

Finding new smiles is always a good thing!

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/30/2013 6:57:00 AM

Yes, the symbolism of this dandelion is precious and something to always be treasured by this person! I loved reading this delightful and enlightening poem this morning! What a lovely piece, Great Work!!

Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/30/2013 11:12:00 PM

Thanks Russell!

Ilene Bauer

Date: 5/30/2013 4:44:00 AM

this is what poetry should be - a small moment captured perfectly! (by the way, mr. timothy levi hicks - if ever you're in my neck of the woods (nyc), you'll change your mind about tap water...)

Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/30/2013 11:12:00 PM

Haha... well if I ever got to New York, I shall try it! I'm pretty much on the opposite side of the country, however. You pointed out why I love haiku so much... that ability to capture little moments and encapsulate in them.