Haiku

the flame of the lighter

amplifies the fluttering

in our lips

English version by Liviu Martinescu
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Agustin Avatar
January 2, 2025 at 8:13 AM
I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed New Year.
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February 7, 2016 at 10:45 AM
Constantin Severin, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing you're poetry. LOVE LINDA
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January 12, 2016 at 2:27 PM
Constantin Severin,, Enjoyed reading your poem, Forever --- SKAT
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January 5, 2012 at 8:07 PM
Very profound verse! Always, Laura
Smith Avatar
October 22, 2011 at 5:57 PM
You have a lot of talent, I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.. feel free to let me know when you have another poem up.. welcome to PS. Take care
Ramage Avatar
October 8, 2011 at 3:32 AM
Welcome to Poetry soup. Keep writing, look forward to reading more. Lee
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