Haiku

at last, the scorching
sun says a good night, like the
stormy seas of life.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Wesley Avatar
November 6, 2011 at 5:16 PM
I find this form difficult but you did a great write with perfect 5 7 5 and imagery. Nicely done.
Dietrich Avatar
August 29, 2011 at 10:34 PM
I like this analogy of life to stormy seas and scorching sun, INgibo. Where do you write? AT your house? Or do you go somewhere different?
Brown Avatar
August 27, 2011 at 12:55 PM
What a wonderful start to my weekend reading your wonderful poetry. Thank you for sharing your writing Ingibo. Hope you are having a beautiful weekend. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
August 27, 2011 at 10:37 AM
Lovely haiku with nice images, Ingibo
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