Haiku 32

could i imagine a life with you not in it breathing with no air

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Sarah Ann Jullion

Date: 4/28/2023 9:30:00 PM

Hi Robert and thank you for following me. I like your way with words... you can use just a few to say a lot. Thanks for posting them. :)

Kathy Bahr

Date: 8/2/2021 10:30:00 AM

SPOT ON..

Peter Rees

Date: 7/28/2021 8:13:00 AM

Compelling and simply stated. A beautiful few words.

Brian Sambourne

Date: 7/28/2021 8:11:00 AM

Exceptional Haiku! Very thought-provoking. Cheers, Brian

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/4/2021 5:12:00 AM

Hello Richard, thes are beautiful lines you created. Enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/6/2021 3:43:00 PM

Richard you have comments on this poem. Mine and another poet. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Jan Allison

Date: 4/3/2021 11:58:00 AM

lovely lines Richard:-) hugs jan xx