Haiku 32

could i imagine
a life with you not in it
breathing with no air
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Jullion Avatar
April 28, 2023 at 9:30 PM
Hi Robert and thank you for following me. I like your way with words... you can use just a few to say a lot. Thanks for posting them. :)
Bahr Avatar
August 2, 2021 at 10:30 AM
SPOT ON..
Rees Avatar
July 28, 2021 at 8:13 AM
Compelling and simply stated. A beautiful few words.
Sambourne Avatar
July 28, 2021 at 8:11 AM
Exceptional Haiku! Very thought-provoking. Cheers, Brian
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 4, 2021 at 5:12 AM
Hello Richard, thes are beautiful lines you created. Enjoy your day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 6, 2021 at 3:43 PM
Richard you have comments on this poem. Mine and another poet. Enjoy your evening my friend.
Allison Avatar
April 3, 2021 at 11:58 AM
lovely lines Richard:-) hugs jan xx
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