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Haiku 31 Shadow Love

sun then a shadow
                     human silhouette sparkles
                           a full love eclipse 













David Meade
11/22/2014
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December 3, 2014 at 9:21 PM

Just beautiful imagery, conjurs memories of Pink Floyd.

Charmaine Chircop

November 24, 2014 at 7:49 AM

I love the way you Haiku:.)

November 25, 2014 at 11:30 AM

My dear Charma -- love the new pic! Thank-you for your love and support -- always look forward to reading your comments.

November 23, 2014 at 11:17 AM

A great metaphor in haiku style. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

November 23, 2014 at 7:43 PM

thank-you my dear friend -- enjoyed yours today! Off to do yoga!!

November 23, 2014 at 9:12 AM

HEY! The Haiku master strikes again! GREAT!

November 23, 2014 at 8:31 PM

WROTE A HAIKU!!! Check it out, it's called, "WORMS"!

November 23, 2014 at 8:00 PM

Go for it my man! LOL I'm waiting with bated breath (or something)

November 23, 2014 at 7:45 PM

Thinking about doing a fart haiku -- sulfur waffling from the volcano, rotten eggs . . . well, I am stilling working on it. . . give me some time I think I can work it out!!

Andrea Dietrich

November 22, 2014 at 7:20 PM

I agree with sara. a very creative work this is!!

November 22, 2014 at 5:03 PM

Very creative work..Enjoyed reading it this evening..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

November 23, 2014 at 8:37 PM

Thank-you Sara -- hope you get to enjoy the holiday, is your husband sight any better?

November 22, 2014 at 3:44 PM

Hello David, Your painted a quite beautiful image here with your Haiku. Very well-done indeed!! Best Wishes, Gary

November 23, 2014 at 8:38 PM

Thank-you friend Gary -- not on the same level as your poetry but they are fun to do.

Brenda Meier-Hans

November 22, 2014 at 2:59 PM

A very well thought out Haiku David.

November 23, 2014 at 8:39 PM

thank-you Ms. Brenda -- I hope you have an awesome Thanksgiving! Many blessings my friend.

November 22, 2014 at 2:07 PM

A lovely striking picture you have created here, David. Well done! // paul

November 23, 2014 at 8:41 PM

Thank-you -- funny how things can hit you. Thank-you for your continued support and good cheer.

November 22, 2014 at 2:06 PM

this is beautiful and smart David...you certainly have a calling for haiku

November 23, 2014 at 8:42 PM

We each have our callings but the greatest is the one call we all have -- come follow me. . . Thank-you for your support.

November 22, 2014 at 1:46 PM

I really like this David...I can picture the loving couple.

November 23, 2014 at 8:43 PM

Thanks Tim, I hope you have a wonderful thanksgiving -- be safe my friend.

November 22, 2014 at 11:01 AM

such a beautiful image you have conjured up in my mind - lovely haiku:-) Hugs jan xx

November 23, 2014 at 8:44 PM

Conjured is a great word . . . very mysterious. You are the best and I appreciate you deeply.

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