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Haiku 31 Shadow Love

sun then a shadow human silhouette sparkles a full love eclipse David Meade 11/22/2014 Live Generously

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Maurice Yvonne

Date: 12/3/2014 9:21:00 PM

Just beautiful imagery, conjurs memories of Pink Floyd.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/24/2014 7:49:00 AM

I love the way you Haiku:.)

David Meade
Date: 11/25/2014 11:30:00 AM

My dear Charma -- love the new pic! Thank-you for your love and support -- always look forward to reading your comments.

Bl Devnath

Date: 11/23/2014 11:17:00 AM

A great metaphor in haiku style. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

David Meade
Date: 11/23/2014 7:43:00 PM

thank-you my dear friend -- enjoyed yours today! Off to do yoga!!

Jack Ellison

Date: 11/23/2014 9:12:00 AM

HEY! The Haiku master strikes again! GREAT!

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/23/2014 8:31:00 PM

WROTE A HAIKU!!! Check it out, it's called, "WORMS"!

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/23/2014 8:00:00 PM

Go for it my man! LOL I'm waiting with bated breath (or something)

David Meade
Date: 11/23/2014 7:45:00 PM

Thinking about doing a fart haiku -- sulfur waffling from the volcano, rotten eggs . . . well, I am stilling working on it. . . give me some time I think I can work it out!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/22/2014 7:20:00 PM

I agree with sara. a very creative work this is!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/22/2014 5:03:00 PM

Very creative work..Enjoyed reading it this evening..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

David Meade
Date: 11/23/2014 8:37:00 PM

Thank-you Sara -- hope you get to enjoy the holiday, is your husband sight any better?

Gary Bateman

Date: 11/22/2014 3:44:00 PM

Hello David, Your painted a quite beautiful image here with your Haiku. Very well-done indeed!! Best Wishes, Gary

David Meade
Date: 11/23/2014 8:38:00 PM

Thank-you friend Gary -- not on the same level as your poetry but they are fun to do.

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 11/22/2014 2:59:00 PM

A very well thought out Haiku David.

David Meade
Date: 11/23/2014 8:39:00 PM

thank-you Ms. Brenda -- I hope you have an awesome Thanksgiving! Many blessings my friend.

Paul Callus

Date: 11/22/2014 2:07:00 PM

A lovely striking picture you have created here, David. Well done! // paul

David Meade
Date: 11/23/2014 8:41:00 PM

Thank-you -- funny how things can hit you. Thank-you for your continued support and good cheer.

David Mohn

Date: 11/22/2014 2:06:00 PM

this is beautiful and smart David...you certainly have a calling for haiku

David Meade
Date: 11/23/2014 8:42:00 PM

We each have our callings but the greatest is the one call we all have -- come follow me. . . Thank-you for your support.

Tim Smith

Date: 11/22/2014 1:46:00 PM

I really like this David...I can picture the loving couple.

David Meade
Date: 11/23/2014 8:43:00 PM

Thanks Tim, I hope you have a wonderful thanksgiving -- be safe my friend.

Jan Allison

Date: 11/22/2014 11:01:00 AM

such a beautiful image you have conjured up in my mind - lovely haiku:-) Hugs jan xx

David Meade
Date: 11/23/2014 8:44:00 PM

Conjured is a great word . . . very mysterious. You are the best and I appreciate you deeply.