Haiku 31

The garden has tears 
	on lonely paths.
	You know where to look.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
April 6, 2013 at 4:56 PM
wow, wonderfully sad.
Jordan Avatar
April 6, 2013 at 6:28 PM
If I recall correctly, I was feeling down the day I wrote it. Cloudy weather does that for me. Jack
Jones Avatar
April 2, 2013 at 4:51 PM
Hummm???? Touching.....Donna
Jordan Avatar
April 2, 2013 at 5:45 PM
Thanks, Donna. Jack
Ober Avatar
April 2, 2013 at 11:24 AM
You are turning into quite a haiku expert, Jack! This one is truly wonderful.
Jordan Avatar
April 2, 2013 at 5:47 PM
Thank you, Heather. That's a mighty fine comment from one of the best Soup-poets. Jack
Hunter Avatar
April 2, 2013 at 10:03 AM
This one really hit me, Jack...love it!
Jordan Avatar
April 2, 2013 at 5:48 PM
Thanks, Caleb. I appreciate the nice comment. Jack
Andresen Avatar
April 2, 2013 at 7:29 AM
- Plant lots of flowers friends in your garden .... they smell so good .... thanks for the lovely haiku Jack. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Jordan Avatar
April 2, 2013 at 5:49 PM
You're welcome, Anne-Lise. Flowers are a great idea. It might not be so lonely. Jack
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