Haiku 31

The garden has tears on lonely paths. You know where to look.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/6/2013 4:56:00 PM

wow, wonderfully sad.

Jack Jordan
Date: 4/6/2013 6:28:00 PM

If I recall correctly, I was feeling down the day I wrote it. Cloudy weather does that for me. Jack

Donna Jones

Date: 4/2/2013 4:51:00 PM

Hummm???? Touching.....Donna

Jack Jordan
Date: 4/2/2013 5:45:00 PM

Thanks, Donna. Jack

Heather Ober

Date: 4/2/2013 11:24:00 AM

You are turning into quite a haiku expert, Jack! This one is truly wonderful.

Jack Jordan
Date: 4/2/2013 5:47:00 PM

Thank you, Heather. That's a mighty fine comment from one of the best Soup-poets. Jack

Painted Hunter

Date: 4/2/2013 10:03:00 AM

This one really hit me, Jack...love it!

Jack Jordan
Date: 4/2/2013 5:48:00 PM

Thanks, Caleb. I appreciate the nice comment. Jack

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/2/2013 7:29:00 AM

- Plant lots of flowers friends in your garden .... they smell so good .... thanks for the lovely haiku Jack. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Jack Jordan
Date: 4/2/2013 5:49:00 PM

You're welcome, Anne-Lise. Flowers are a great idea. It might not be so lonely. Jack