Haiku

Crimson embers crack;
Yellow dancers leap upward,
With orange partners.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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June 28, 2011 at 4:57 PM
This one made me think. Great way to describe a burning fire. That's how it spoke to me. I liked it.
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