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haiku 2

  newborn stars
 join their elders~
  paper lanterns

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Date: 12/7/2016 10:55:00 PM
Wonderful :) Rated 7
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Date: 12/4/2016 5:30:00 PM
another amazing write!!
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Date: 11/21/2016 12:30:00 PM
ohh, this is really good with a tremendous juxta in your last line, david... love it!..huggs
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Date: 11/20/2016 5:03:00 AM
Wonderful haiku this is ...
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Date: 11/20/2016 1:05:00 AM
This beautiful haiku has what anyone familiar with haiku could expect...that aha moment! It is brilliant and going into my faves David...where few haiku have gone before! 7 ; )
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david mohn
Date: 11/20/2016 9:31:00 PM
thank you ever so much Connie :)