Haiku 2

newborn stars
 join their elders~
  paper lanterns
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Gauthier Avatar
April 8, 2021 at 9:55 PM
how delightful ~
Tiyane Avatar
December 7, 2016 at 10:55 PM
Wonderful :) Rated 7
Dietrich Avatar
December 4, 2016 at 5:30 PM
another amazing write!!
Onclaud Avatar
November 21, 2016 at 12:30 PM
ohh, this is really good with a tremendous juxta in your last line, david... love it!..huggs
Gupta Avatar
November 20, 2016 at 5:03 AM
Wonderful haiku this is ...
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 20, 2016 at 1:05 AM
This beautiful haiku has what anyone familiar with haiku could expect...that aha moment! It is brilliant and going into my faves David...where few haiku have gone before! 7 ; )
Mohn Avatar
November 20, 2016 at 9:31 PM
thank you ever so much Connie :)
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